[Composed on the eve of the historical day]
कभी मस्जिद की कैद है कभी मंदिर की
अब खुले दिल में भी रख ले कोई,
इक त्रिशूल है या इक तलवार रखी हर घर में
अमन का इक परिंदा भी रख ले कोई.
आब सरयू का हो या रावी का हो, सब लाल हुआ
जामे-मोहब्बत सदा मीठा ज़रा चख ले कोई,
गीता-ग्रन्थ-कुरान बहुत लड़ते देखे हैं
इक ग़ज़ल एका की मीठी सी भी लिख दे कोई.
'अ' से अल्लाह रह गया रह गया 'ग' से गणेश
मैं तो हर लफ्ज़ - हर ज़र्रे में था, ढूंढें कोई,
अदालतें लिखती हैं मेरी भी तकदीर अब तो
खुद ख़ुदा की रज़ा मद्देनज़र रख ले कोई...
-- मनीष छाबड़ा
[ आब = पानी, रज़ा = इच्छा ]
Unity in Diversity :)
Say no 'Divide and Rule' by politicians .. .
absolute gem....
Achha Prayaas.....:)
Though It stands good in general sense, but i think its a slight mismatch for the particular occasion. I think i shall also write a post.
Keep writing poetry! :)
Good One Chhabra; though I feel that U purposely used "Ganesh" in place of "Ram"
Ek Chhabra ne Likhi, Ek Gaurav ne,
Ab Dwivedi bhi kavita likh de koi!!!
@Vikas: Hmm... tumhare vichar pe vichar karna padega...
@Akash: Hehehe ... bahut khoob! :)
bahut-2 sadhuwad!
pahl aur akhri 2 panktiyaan vishesh pasand aayeen :)
nice poem ,,,,,, but tough to follow for everyone
Cha gaya yaar kavita dil ko choo gayee.
Yeh kavita agar us din court mein suna dete to sara saari partiyan apna case hi waapis le leti.
Aur batao kya chal raha hai.
awesome lines....
plz send dis lines to our country politicians den our country better than dis ....
Subhan Allah... :)
--
Deepak Jain
Last two lines are really awesome....
This quite surprised me that God(s) can be a litigant in Indian courts as Ram Lalla(Child Rama) in Ayodhya case.!!!!!!
What an irony God is litigant and a human is judge!!!!!!!!!!!!!
height of kalyug
Bahut badiya..
badhiya bhai....but a handful extremist in all religion try to disturb the balance among community ... just heard the person who led Operation blue star was attacked in London....need to spread this message more and more..